Ashleigh Brown

Gosh.... if only I could write like that. :) I loved it and I felt as if I was in my room reading a book. I reallyyyy think that you ...

Wooooowwww!!! Can you say greatness, this piece was incredible. I tried to look for errors but didn't succeed, because this was exquisite. I love how you kept the suspense increasing ...

This was good, i like the way you start it out reading a dictionary entry. I think this could really turn into a pretty amazing book. Keep up the good ...

Once again you have another amazing entry, no doubt about it that you'll win. I really enjoyed this one, but there was one thing i didn't like. When you put ...

This was pretty good, and there wasn't a lot of things that needed to be changed. I feel though you should add a little more detail to draw the reader ...

I really liked it, kept me scrolling down. Everything flowed together , i felt like i was reading a book from the library. Keep up the good work.

[b]I am taking everyone's advice and reediting this.Please feel free to leave comments about the chapter. I need some feedback seriously. Thanks :D It was that cold unforgettable winter’s day ...

Really good, but got a little confused with the people....